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1 EXT. FOREST - NIGHT

Having reached the 30 foot stone wall of their fortress, the ninjas leap into the air to hurdle it. In this shot, from a distance, we see some ninja still running toward it, some leaping, and some clearing it by placing one hand on the top of the wall and swinging their body over, as one would to clear a three foot fence.

2 FOREST - CONTINUOUS

Grip charges the wall surrounded by other ninja like a buffalo caught in a stampede.

NARRATION
The wall to our fortress...

3 FOREST - CONTINUOUS

Grip leaps with visible exertion while all those around him seem to virtually float into the air.

NARRATION
I had never before noticed how very tall it is.

4 FOREST - CONTINUOUS

Grip barely manages to grab onto the top of the wall.

5 FOREST - CONTINUOUS

Grip struggles to pull himself up while on either side of him other ninja clear the wall with ease.

 

 

 

Sean drew this exactly how I had it in my head, only it's ten times cooler with all his skill, detail, and extreme angles added.