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PAGE TWELVE

1 FORTRESS COURTYARD - CONTINUOUS

Closer. Grip is in the dead center of the frame, but his dress and movements are identical to the rest so we can’t distinguish him as different.

NARRATION
The odd wolf acts in a manner identical to the others.

2 FORTRESS COURTYARD - CONTINUOUS

Closer. Only a handful of ninja in this shot with Grip still in the center.

NARRATION
He looks the same.

3 FORTRESS COURTYARD - CONTINUOUS

Closer. Just Grip in the center and a few body parts of others protruding into the frame. Those body parts however, still indicate that Grip’s sword practice movements are still synchronized with the others.

NARRATION
He does nothing to appear unusual.

4 FORTRESS COURTYARD - CONTINUOUS

We’ve completed our zoom and only Grip is in the frame.

NARRATION
An outside observer would be unable to see any difference.

5 FORTRESS COURTYARD - CONTINUOUS

Now we take a different angle and see two other ninja, not part of the practicing group, standing in the background staring at Grip who continues his practice in the foreground, oblivious to their attention.

NARRATION
But the pack knows.

6 FORTRESS COURTYARD - CONTINUOUS

A two-shot of the two ninjas (Grip not in frame) who continue to stare off-frame at Grip. Close enough that we can see the suspicion in their eyes.

NARRATION
Somehow they just know.

 

 

 

This page continues the thought from the last page and as I said there, it's exactly what I was picturing in my head. The second to last panel is a lot more dynamic than I was thinking.

The last panel is just cool as hell- that guy on the right looks like he's thinking some seriously evil thoughts.