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1 FORTRESS COURTYARD - CONTINUOUS
Grip squats down and swings his sword in a huge, sweeping arc of more than half a complete circle, deeply slicing the legs of a number of ninja.
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The arrow still in my side, the simple act of squatting blinds me with pain.
2 FORTRESS COURTYARD - CONTINUOUS
Grip leaps off of the wall, leaving a pile of wounded ninja behind, and behind them other ninja trying to get past their fallen comrades to pursue.
3 EXT. FOREST - NIGHT
Grip still in mid-air dropping down on the outside of the outer wall. He pulls the arrow from his side as he falls.
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I wrench the arrow from my side because I have no other choice.
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This action- taken without concern for the intense agony it causes me to suffer- is a familiar and welcome mode of thought.
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A brief return to a black-and-white existence where I had no doubts, no fear.
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I was action and being and nothing else.
4 FOREST - CONTINUOUS
Grip runs for his life. In the background dozens of ninjas drop from the fortress’ outer wall in pursuit.
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That is no longer my life.
5 FOREST - CONTINUOUS
Close up of Grip’s strained face as he runs as hard and fast as he can.
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I run for miles.
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With every bit of speed I have.
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I run to the city.
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The only place I stand a chance.
The narration that I wrote for the last panel was something I could do without, and when I played around with the boxes on the page and found the layout you see here, with the wistful thoughts of the life he left behind on the panel where he is small, isolated, and in
silhouette, I thought this was cooler.
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